The Absolute Book, by Elizabeth Knox
Jan. 28th, 2020 11:49 amIt isn't obvious to me why I don't like this book more. I read an earlier draft of it too, and I assumed that my somewhat disengaged response was largely based on my mood at the time, but no, I have the same response now -- while still seeing all the positives which originally made me track the problem to myself instead of the book. One of the book's characters lives under a spell which makes him impossible to fully perceive - people look at him and see not a memorable face, but an assemblage of features - and the book itself seems to me to rest under a spell like that. Out of the corner of my eye it seems like a book I should like more than I do, which, as with The Obelisk Gate, I find frustrating. It makes me want to spend more time thinking about it, and not posting this post until I'm more sure -- but in service of my intention to write up every book I read, and since I'm already two books behind:
The Absolute Book twines various stories together, but begins with the fact that Taryn Cornick's sister has been murdered, and Taryn has found a way to answer that murder with vengeance. But she, previously an atheist, is given reason to believe that she may have a real and damnable soul, and even though her own sin is subtler and more apparently just than the one she has punished, she may be disproportionately imperilled by her actions. Because she has recently written a book of popular history which has made her interesting to those who can exploit sin, a book about the disasters to which libraries are vulnerable, in which one particular artifact pops up again and again, surviving fires which should have destroyed it. An artifact whose trail had been lost, until she picked it out and put it on display.
Even this bit of plot summary feels like too much disturbance of the book's smooth surface -- the choice of when to make what obvious being so particular, when the protagonist begins in a state of ignorance about the rules of reality. But also, as plot summaries go, it doesn't begin to cover things. This is a thick book with a lot going on in it.
So what doesn't work for me? Things I have to invest effort in believing. I think that's what adds up cumulatively to my disengagement, even though in every instance, I can invest the effort. Characters who don't feel whole to me unless I give them a little extra twist: the one with the spell of vagueness on him, who spends the whole first chunk of the book not feeling vague to me at all. A spy who doesn't feel like a spy, who never has the kind of conversation which suggests specific professional competence. (In fact the whole response of the authorities to what's going on in the book feels insufficient to me. The book isn't really about those authorities, but they feel like a loose end, or rather like something which has been rendered a single loose end when it should have been something more complicated. I'm not sure if I use 'should' there to mean 'would in reality' or 'come on, you've put in spies! There has to be spy stuff when you've put in spies!')
This thing with characters is an extension of the quality which I remember making the characters in others of Elizabeth's books (especially The Vintner's Luck) complex and real to me: a quality of not being filled in from the start, not declaring themselves at once by action or self-description, but of slowly opening, to end up complete. I wonder if it's simply the much wider angle of The Absolute Book which makes the difference, withdrawing far enough that I start seeing unreality instead of unveiling coherence.
There is also the metaphysics, which are blended in a way that doesn't quite sit well with me.* And there's the pace of revelation and what I can hypothesize about what's going on. I don't have large enough expectations about what the story's central artifact is and who is hunting it and why to be left with them either satisfyingly fulfilled or satisfyingly undermined -- and this applies to the experience of rereading it, too -- even though I like the answers. This came clearer to me when I was trying to describe the story of those who are looking for the artifact, because I could describe them in a single neat sentence, but it's a sentence that takes you right from the start of the book's questions about them to the end of its revelations: a satisfying sentence, no smaller slice of which is as satisfying.
Among the many features of the book I like -- wonderful descriptions of beauty and ugliness and, especially, of fire, details of the blended metaphysics which tingle down my spine -- two set pieces stand out, extended scenes which do opposite involving and difficult things and in which everything I've described as not working does work: one of them an action scene based on close attention to what's physically possible and to the rhythms of suspense, and the other taking place on a plane of reality where where the physically possible is almost but not quite irrelevant, and something like dream-logic reigns. I'd take either scene as an exemplar of how to write that thing. One of them kept me up till one in the morning and I cried at the end of the other.
* Not the thing which doesn't sit well with me, but a side-question which has been occurring to me every so often: when did gods being shaped and fed by belief, instead of/as well as the other way around, become one of the standard options available to fantasy? I remember meeting it first in Small Gods, but is that when it was new?
The Absolute Book twines various stories together, but begins with the fact that Taryn Cornick's sister has been murdered, and Taryn has found a way to answer that murder with vengeance. But she, previously an atheist, is given reason to believe that she may have a real and damnable soul, and even though her own sin is subtler and more apparently just than the one she has punished, she may be disproportionately imperilled by her actions. Because she has recently written a book of popular history which has made her interesting to those who can exploit sin, a book about the disasters to which libraries are vulnerable, in which one particular artifact pops up again and again, surviving fires which should have destroyed it. An artifact whose trail had been lost, until she picked it out and put it on display.
Even this bit of plot summary feels like too much disturbance of the book's smooth surface -- the choice of when to make what obvious being so particular, when the protagonist begins in a state of ignorance about the rules of reality. But also, as plot summaries go, it doesn't begin to cover things. This is a thick book with a lot going on in it.
So what doesn't work for me? Things I have to invest effort in believing. I think that's what adds up cumulatively to my disengagement, even though in every instance, I can invest the effort. Characters who don't feel whole to me unless I give them a little extra twist: the one with the spell of vagueness on him, who spends the whole first chunk of the book not feeling vague to me at all. A spy who doesn't feel like a spy, who never has the kind of conversation which suggests specific professional competence. (In fact the whole response of the authorities to what's going on in the book feels insufficient to me. The book isn't really about those authorities, but they feel like a loose end, or rather like something which has been rendered a single loose end when it should have been something more complicated. I'm not sure if I use 'should' there to mean 'would in reality' or 'come on, you've put in spies! There has to be spy stuff when you've put in spies!')
This thing with characters is an extension of the quality which I remember making the characters in others of Elizabeth's books (especially The Vintner's Luck) complex and real to me: a quality of not being filled in from the start, not declaring themselves at once by action or self-description, but of slowly opening, to end up complete. I wonder if it's simply the much wider angle of The Absolute Book which makes the difference, withdrawing far enough that I start seeing unreality instead of unveiling coherence.
There is also the metaphysics, which are blended in a way that doesn't quite sit well with me.* And there's the pace of revelation and what I can hypothesize about what's going on. I don't have large enough expectations about what the story's central artifact is and who is hunting it and why to be left with them either satisfyingly fulfilled or satisfyingly undermined -- and this applies to the experience of rereading it, too -- even though I like the answers. This came clearer to me when I was trying to describe the story of those who are looking for the artifact, because I could describe them in a single neat sentence, but it's a sentence that takes you right from the start of the book's questions about them to the end of its revelations: a satisfying sentence, no smaller slice of which is as satisfying.
Among the many features of the book I like -- wonderful descriptions of beauty and ugliness and, especially, of fire, details of the blended metaphysics which tingle down my spine -- two set pieces stand out, extended scenes which do opposite involving and difficult things and in which everything I've described as not working does work: one of them an action scene based on close attention to what's physically possible and to the rhythms of suspense, and the other taking place on a plane of reality where where the physically possible is almost but not quite irrelevant, and something like dream-logic reigns. I'd take either scene as an exemplar of how to write that thing. One of them kept me up till one in the morning and I cried at the end of the other.
* Not the thing which doesn't sit well with me, but a side-question which has been occurring to me every so often: when did gods being shaped and fed by belief, instead of/as well as the other way around, become one of the standard options available to fantasy? I remember meeting it first in Small Gods, but is that when it was new?